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    Default S.u.m.m.e.r I.n.o.c.e.n.c.e

    To the lake
    Just down the block
    The geese are there
    In tiny flocks

    And soccer balls
    In the hot summer sun
    The sweat is rolling
    Off of everyone

    And those sweet dreams
    And their nightmares
    Of ghosts long dead
    And flawless flair

    With heartfelt wants
    Of what we never need
    Times when air was thin
    And we couldn't breath

    The dogs were crying
    To the dying moon
    The daylight coming
    In sweet solitude

    And those sweet dreams
    And their nightmares
    Of ghosts long dead
    And flawless flair

    With heartfelt wants
    Of what we never need
    Times when air was thin
    And we couldn't breath

    And those demons eyes
    In the dark ash trees
    Just an owl's 'hoot'
    And they ceased to be...

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    Very nice! I really enjoyed this one...it struck a note of nostalgia and strangely a level of remorse in me.

    It flowed well and was very good.


    A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

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    "Innocence" has two 'n's
    As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....

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    Hmm very nice, I have no talent at all, you seem like you should be a writer! or if you are one then good job!

    It really touched me in my heart feeling everything you typed.
    Last edited by halomaster2437; 06-30-2007 at 08:46 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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