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    Senior Member Frai7ty's Avatar
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    Default Poem: ?????

    IDK, I feel like expressing myself. Lets make something up off the top of my head .


    Up with Joy.
    Begone with the pain.
    Because to live in it.
    Will just drive others away.

    Just sit and smile.
    And wash the suffering away.
    Remember the joy of your past.
    Of your infancy.

    It isn't hard to remember.
    Just close your eyes.
    And think back.
    To just before the black.

    Now remember the carefree life.
    Wasn't it great.
    Your life before the worry.
    When you where full of glory.

    Now hold those thoughts close to your hart.
    Never let them go.
    Because than you are lost.
    Because than you lost your light.

    And then your back in the darkness.



    So how was that for off the top of my head?

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    A Light in your Darkness Pamela's Avatar
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    Default Not bad a all^^

    I sometimes have poetic convos on AIM or MSN...this is a spontaneous one...what do you think?

    MikaruWoulf: ..I can feel my heart beating in my ears.. my mouth is dry... and I feel so alive.
    fiercefairy911: I can feel the touch of the air on my face...and I listen to the sound of music as it soothes and haunts me all at once

    MikaruWoulf: ^_^ A fire deep inside that I can't describe, the burn of the pain as it sinks in my brain, consumes my life that flashes at my eyes. Unknown, despair, I'm almost there. Can't you give me the reason tonight?
    fiercefairy911: To reason is to lament..it aches our soul to remember..reason?...I think not...hope?...always in the fringes of our thoughts...the edge of what we can accept

    MikaruWoulf: Acceptance is defeat because the end has been drawn, I'd rather just burn and crash into dawn. A new day, a new life, it's a cycle of strife, but to be is to see all around you complete. Complete the circle and it's just so bleak. Hope is lost, and the game forfeit, so lose yourself in yourself until the last hit.
    fiercefairy911: To complete the circle is to go on.I struggle to see the next dawn....Hope lost...all life stife?

    MikaruWoulf: Complete the circle and follow the plan, it's all the scheme laid out by the man, it hurts to break free because you are lost in the sea.. a sea of doubt and strife, yes.. but control of yourself is best. I'd rather die a million times and re-raise from the ash, than live a million days on auto-rehash. True choice, control and the happiness of pain, it just takes a step out of the circle to gain.
    fiercefairy911: The circle is strong as it ensnares us daily...we can choose to break away...or stay..Control is not the asnwer to all things...we are bearers of so many things...but life can be more than a circle confining...teaching us ..helping refining...on loves warm embrace we should lean...hoping always that understanding we glean

    fiercefairy911: (I am not as good as you)
    MikaruWoulf: ((Sure you are.))
    MikaruWoulf: I just got sidetracked.
    fiercefairy911: lol
    MikaruWoulf: I'm arguing with admins again.
    fiercefairy911: who?
    MikaruWoulf: I swear, I'm going to get banned soon. ~_~
    fiercefairy911: *hugs*...just a reinforcement
    MikaruWoulf: Heh heh.
    MikaruWoulf: I'm such a jackass sometimes.
    fiercefairy911: lol I soo wish...nvm....no you arent..well maybe
    MikaruWoulf: ...?
    fiercefairy911: do you mean what i wish?
    MikaruWoulf: yeah
    fiercefairy911: That I could just spout off what comes to mind when you say things
    MikaruWoulf: ah, go for it.
    fiercefairy911: aaahh love...its ...*hugs * I want to say how much I care
    MikaruWoulf: *hugs* Well, say it then, Pam. ~_^
    MikaruWoulf: That, or you can tell me goodnight, because I really need to get some sleep. So tired.. and so much class tomorrow, and then work. Bleh.


    A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

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    Senior Member Frai7ty's Avatar
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    I liked it. Reminds me of just living life.

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    A Light in your Darkness Pamela's Avatar
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    It really is...we get spontaneous at times...we also RPG together at times(Dear God you should see some of our convos)

    OffTopic: He is also getting married soon,moving to Ohio for a teaching position,and completing his PHD...he is only afraid he will scare his students.

    At this point I slapped him (e-slap) and told him to behave and don't scare the kids.


    A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

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